Friday, March 26, 2010

Third Section

The major conflicit in this novel is that Jace wants to get laid. He has high hopes to succeed in this goal, because he is now 18 and wants to swipe his V-card with some hot babe from the resort.

He goes through alot of little conflicts along his journey to becoming a man. He has to complete this goal with his family staying with him. But Jace sees a light at the end of the tunel when he meets a smokin' hot babe on the beach named Kate. Jace falls head over heals for her. He makes it his mission to open up those flood gates and bring his boat into Kate's port (wink wink).

But along this path of the sex hunt Jace finds out that Conor isn't as much as a jerk that Jace thought he once was and becomes some what friends with Conor. But by doing this Kate thought that Jace was one of those jerk jocks. This creates an obstacle in the way of him getting in Kate's pants.

What would you do in Jace's situation?

6 comments:

  1. Well if I wanted to get into a girls pants I would find not a random girl, but a girl I like and try and date them. Then I would hope it would happen.

    Know if I was a sless I would get her drunk then do it. ( If I was a sless ball then I would do that, but since im not a sless ball I wouldn't)

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  2. If I was in Jaces situation, I would go for the girl instead of becoming friends with a guy I didn't like before. If he's really this desperate then go for the girl, because he might not have a chance with a hot chick like Kate, and after his trip he could become friends withy Conor.

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  3. I think that it wouldn't matter. If Conor isn't a jerk like he seems, than don't try and run because other people think he is. I would go and show Kate that I am who I am, and if she likes it, than good, if not, its not because of who I hang out with, its because she doesn't like me.

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  4. If i was in jaces situation i would win the girl over and not give Conner two moments of my time. I would just try really hard to get to know her and at the same time she could get to know me better.

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  5. i think i would ditch connor and worry about the girl more than anything seeing as hes tryin so hard to get laid, why worry about becoming friends with a guy

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  6. If i was Jace, i would still try and get with the girl! im sure Connor would understand!.....it's a guy thing!

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